nice piano rolling
alright, my first nitpick, is the piano. the melody seems ok, but the actual sound isnt right... too strong, i think piano should always be a nice subtle hint in songs unless its JUST the piano and some soft pads or something, but in this it seems too in your face, partially because of volume and also because i think the hit sounds too strong, if you can take away that initial attack of the keys then it might help, also when the piano hits higher notes it loses too much of its sound, i think you should spend some time grabbing some piano SF2's and giving them ago, not hard to find. and when your done there, im feeling a slight reverb to it aswell. now moving on, that was a pretty awesome sounding guitar solo there, and i think its also the first time iver ever heard slayer plugin sound any good (tried using it for a song of mine with apollo 440 lyrics, wasnt my best work).
The drums are awesome, they sit comfortably in the background, and with the amount of melodies you have playing i think thats a good thing, in a simpler song the drums should pop more to help keep the song solid but this is pretty busy so i think youve done well to keep them discreet. i really cant pick anythign apart other than piano sound to be honest. everything gels really well except that damn flkeys piano.
9/5 here, but since the piano rolling is so good ill 5/5 it to the left